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Old 05-23-2003, 12:19 PM
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[color=#000000ost_uid0]Is this scene really necessary? Seriously, it's short, it's backstory, it's not entirely relevant. I would think this scene could be omitted from the fiver.

That said, here's my thoughts. Play with them as you will.

[bost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] After the first One left, the Oracle predicted there'd be another One. That's you, Neo.
[bost_uid0]Neo:[/bost_uid0] Wouldn't that make me the Two?

[bost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] ...and that's why you're the Savior of all mankind.
[bost_uid0]Neo:[/bost_uid0] Is that really true?
[bost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] It is until [iost_uid0]Reloaded[/iost_uid0].

[iost_uid0](^ I don't really like this one, but [/iost_uid0]Reloaded[iost_uid0] really changed the meaning of this scene.)[/iost_uid0]

[bost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] I know your upset about being freed. We try not to free people after a certain age.
[bost_uid0]Neo:[/bost_uid0] It's not that. It's....
[bost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] What?
[bost_uid0]Neo:[/bost_uid0] American Idol. I [iost_uid0]loved[/iost_uid0] that show.

(or, for brevity, you could just have Neo say "It's not that. It's (sob) American Idol. I [iost_uid0]loved[/iost_uid0] tht show.")[/colorost_uid0]
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