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Old 02-20-2004, 03:32 AM
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[color=#000000ost_uid0]ok i'm writing a sci-fi story and needed some pro insight so here it is

The rain cut though the bleak night sky as the ocasional strike of lightning lit the soilders' stern faces. They all knew they had to protect the alliance outpost at all costs, what they didn't know was that they would never see the light of day again. One of the gaurds spied a movement but before he could alert anyone the figure silenced him, permently. In the blink of an eye searchlights snapped on and the phantom figure dropped 12 more soilders before the first hit the cold ground. He ran forward, fire splashing from the muzzel of his gun, illuminating the victim's face for a split second before they sank like a stone. When he was confident he was the only living thing left he walked slowly towards the base as the smoke seeped from his gun and floated over the dark red pools of blood that intergrated with the muddy brown pools of rain. He arrived at the door and placed a small brown package inside then he ran off, dissepearing into the night. As he approched the small Seeker jeep he pushed a button on his watch. Back at the base the package ruptured into a fireball that rushed through the halls in a tidal wave of burning hatred, it made its way to the power core and removed the base from the face of Dioge. As Shroud drove off he felt nothing, this was war, those men were a threat to his planet and he did what he had to in order to neutralize that threat.

whoa that took long to type
comments anyone?[/colorost_uid0]
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