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ost_uid0]That was actually intentional, meant to make Neo sound more stupid, as in, "Oh. Umm... 'When?'" If we can find a phrasing that makes that work, great, if not, that's fine too.[/color
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ost_uid0]The more I think about your version, Standback, the more I like it! I'd say keep it the way it is then.
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