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09-18-2003, 04:32 PM
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 ost_uid0]Sorry 'bout that, NAHT. Mine own opinion is already back on the previous page - namely, that none of the options really caught my eye. With the possible exception of NeoMatrix's "pole" joke... I'm just iffy about the wording on that one, most of all because I really don't like stage directions. They completely break the flow. Maybe something like this?[b ost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] The lesson you should learn today is to always be alert, and-- watch out for that pole![b ost_uid0]Neo:[/bost_uid0] Owwwww! Ow. Hey, wasn't it [iost_uid0]Agents[/iost_uid0] we were supposed to look out for? [b ost_uid0]Morpheus:[/bost_uid0] First we must work on poles. Then Agents.Given our lack of enthusiasm... I'd actually be in favor of just leaving this scene un-fived. Except that then everybody asks, "WHAT?! what about the woman in the red dress?!". Which I'm not sure the pole bit solves. Of course, there's always the M&Ms...  [/colorost_uid0]
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