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ost_uid0]I think cutting the traitor bit from the tofu scene takes away some nice exposition; if we use it, it should stay in just to let us know where we're at and what's going on. The previous scene does that too, but it's a short line so there's no harm in keeping it.For the Santa gag, I prefer Standback's version because I think the "Anti-Claus" bit crosses the line of subtlety that we've been dancing around.[/color ost_uid0]
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