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ost_uid0="Pteryx"][color=#000000 ost_uid0]I don't know... do we need a block this long when the fiver is already looking more like a "tenner"? Â -- Pteryx[/color ost_uid0][/quote ost_uid0][color=#000000 ost_uid0]If we want a shorter version, perhaps this would suffice.Agent Smith: I will never allow you to marry my daughter. Morpheus: Buh? Agent Smith: Er, I mean--Ah, Morpheus, we meet at last. Morpheus: Bite me. Agent Smith: If necessary. But there's essentially three things happening in this block: Cypher betrays the team, Morpheus meets Smith, and Morpheus is beaten up. I think the first two need to be covered; the third is less impotrant since we see Morpheus in custody later. There were good submissions for both the first and the second element. Maybe a combo ...[/color ost_uid0]
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