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03-20-2004, 05:46 AM
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 ost_uid0][quoteost_uid0="Pteryx"]Scooter's got another good idea here, though his second block could stand to be shortened:[/quoteost_uid0]Well, Pteryx has a point, my original submission could be tightened. Redux: [b ost_uid0]Cypher[/bost_uid0]: Great job pulling me back, Tank. Allow me to say "thank you."[b ost_uid0]Tank[/bost_uid0]: Can you say it without the gun? [b ost_uid0]Cypher[/bost_uid0]: Hey Trinity, are you really better off with this airhead, saving our crappy real lives, than living with me in fantasyland?[b ost_uid0]Trinity[/bost_uid0]: Compared to you, I'd be better off with a famished cannibal.[b ost_uid0]Tank[/bost_uid0]: Hey, Cypher! Allow me to say--"you're welcome!"[b ost_uid0]Cypher[/bost_uid0]: Lethal irony sucks. GAK! Though I did like the "disconnected" line.  [/colorost_uid0]
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